Enchanted Garden
Behind lion-colored walls of stone, Carmen poured tiny seeds from a phial into her son’s palm.
“Sprinkle the magic seeds over the soil.”
Max spread the seeds, and his mother helped him water the desolate gravel.
“What seeds are those?” her husband asked when Max had gone.
“Chia.”
“Shouldn’t we teach him science instead of lying?”
“You don’t feel seeds are magical?”
“I do, but…”
“Max has his whole life to learn science, but only his precious childhood to experience magic.”
“You’re a good mom, Carmen.”
“Not a good sorceress?”
“That goes without saying. You’ve enchanted me for years.”
Friday Fictioneers: 100-word stories
photo prompt: Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
The meta-story: I saw a longer story taking place behind the colorless, dry walls in this picture, but cut to 100 (with some hocus-pocus) to participate. I hope it still works.
June 29, 2017 at 10:07 am
This is really good 🙂
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June 29, 2017 at 11:52 am
Well, thank you! That’s nice. 😀
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June 29, 2017 at 11:08 am
Some might argue that when you appreciate the beauty of science you experience the magical, but I understand what you’re saying
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June 29, 2017 at 11:58 am
Neil, I’m personally in strong agreement with that statement. I’ve always thought that, for example, knowing the genus and species of a bird only ADDS to the wonder and magic by helping to understand the bird’s relationships with other creatures and its environment. I didn’t intend to advocate for one over the other.
Thank you for commenting, as always!
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June 29, 2017 at 11:13 am
This was wonderful, Kecia! Loved it…
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June 29, 2017 at 11:58 am
Thank you, Dale. 🙂
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June 29, 2017 at 11:26 am
Hopefully she never stops believing in the magical. Nice one.
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June 29, 2017 at 11:59 am
Thank you.
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June 29, 2017 at 4:05 pm
What a lovely story. I really enjoyed it.
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June 29, 2017 at 7:23 pm
Thank you. 🙂
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June 29, 2017 at 5:32 pm
Lovely
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June 29, 2017 at 7:23 pm
Thank you. Kind of you to say so. 🙂
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June 29, 2017 at 8:41 pm
There is Magic in True Love. — And I love Magic.
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June 29, 2017 at 9:38 pm
Yes, there is. Thank you for reading, Mike, and welcome to the blog.
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June 29, 2017 at 8:51 pm
Dear Kecia,
Someday Max will look back on a magical childhood. Who knows he might even become a scientist. 😉 Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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June 29, 2017 at 9:40 pm
It was my own childhood wonder about nature (encouraged by my parents) that led me into biology and eventually a degree in biochemistry. I think most scientists probably feel that way. I still find the natural world a very magical place. Thank you, Rochelle.
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June 30, 2017 at 1:25 am
Very sweet 🙂
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June 30, 2017 at 7:13 am
Thank you.
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June 30, 2017 at 3:08 am
Your story is enchanting and entertaining! Nan
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June 30, 2017 at 7:13 am
Welcome to the blog, Nan. Thank you.
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June 30, 2017 at 4:04 am
A magical and delightful tale. Excellent
Please click to read my FriFic
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June 30, 2017 at 7:13 am
Thank you!
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June 30, 2017 at 5:44 am
Great story, Kecia. I especially enjoyed the last line.
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June 30, 2017 at 7:14 am
Aww, what a romantic. Thank you.
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June 30, 2017 at 7:42 am
A magical read. 🙂
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June 30, 2017 at 10:27 am
😀 Thank you.
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June 30, 2017 at 10:08 am
A very good mom, indeed. A little magic never hurt a child 🙂
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June 30, 2017 at 10:27 am
😀
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June 30, 2017 at 3:02 pm
Such a darling story!
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June 30, 2017 at 4:12 pm
Thank you. 🙂
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June 30, 2017 at 4:45 pm
Fantastic! Hopefully you’ve received the messages I sent you through your contact form.
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June 30, 2017 at 4:52 pm
I guess not. I haven’t seen anything. I’ll check my spam box. I didn’t know!!!
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June 30, 2017 at 4:55 pm
Oh no. I’ve sent three, maybe four over the last several weeks. Two from today.
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June 30, 2017 at 8:53 pm
Magical! Loved it.
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June 30, 2017 at 9:20 pm
Thanks. 😀
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June 30, 2017 at 9:03 pm
Oh, I like this. She is a smart mother. Children lose the magic too early. It would be nice to keep it as long as they can.
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June 30, 2017 at 9:20 pm
Thank you for reading and commenting. 😀
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June 30, 2017 at 9:28 pm
You’re welcome.
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July 1, 2017 at 9:10 pm
I like this in so many ways. The dialogue, the magic, the message, the romance. Kudos to you!
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July 1, 2017 at 9:34 pm
Thank you, Alicia. I’m glad you liked it. That’s great!
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July 4, 2017 at 11:51 pm
Sweet story, Kecia. Many things are magic to a child. She was an understanding mother. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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July 5, 2017 at 7:38 am
Thank you. 🙂
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July 5, 2017 at 1:16 pm
I loved the flow and message here. Such a sweet story. Well done!
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July 5, 2017 at 1:41 pm
Aww, thank you. I appreciate that.
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