
Oklahoma, 1915
Closest tree, a cemetery cedar ten miles to the east. The team had bellies full of steam heading home. As brothers do, Nick and young Charley jawed side-by-side on the box. Charley stood to deliver a punchline with a flourish. As he waved, a wagonwheel hit a rock, tipping the bed’s heavy load. Charley’s arms pinwheeled.
“Charley!” Nick dropped a line to reach out. The horses veered. Charley tumbled, and the wagon bumped again.
Wildly, Nick yanked to stop the team. “Whoooa…whoooa.”
Leaping from the seat, he ran back, but Charley, head crushed by the wheel, was already dead.
*I like my stories to stand without explanations, but this one merits a note. The story I tell is a fictional account of a historical incident. It happened to two great-uncles of mine. Charley died at age 14, run over by a wagon wheel while hauling a heavy tank of water. Nick, his senior, witnessed the accident. Exactly how Charley happened to fall under the wheel, I don’t know, but I do know Nick was deeply troubled afterward. Two years later, Nick committed a horrific murder, brutally mutilating the man either during the fight or after he was dead, and spent a life sentence in an Oklahoma prison.
Friday Fictioneers: 100 word stories
January 25, 2017 at 10:25 am
There were many accidents in the days of horse drawn transport, you sadly illustrate how easily this could occur. One wonders if the man murdered was responsible for the accident in some way. What-ever it is a sad tale of life’s destroyed.
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January 25, 2017 at 11:05 am
I actually know a little about the murdered man. He was a laborer, down from Illinois for the work. He was tending a store late at night when my great-uncle killed him. My uncle claimed the fight was over a game of craps, which the man had lost. When the man refused to pay up, my uncle, Nick, said he tried to take the money, and there was a fight. No one else was there, so no one knows. People sympathized with the murdered man, said he didn’t have the character to be gambling, that my uncle was lying and had killed the man in his sleep in order to rob the till.
Yes, there were a lot of ways to die on the Oklahoma prairies in those days. It was a harsh life.
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
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January 25, 2017 at 11:04 am
Great description there
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January 25, 2017 at 11:05 am
Thanks, Neil.
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January 25, 2017 at 11:07 am
The added note makes the piece all the more intriguing. Thanks for sharing your flash fiction story with us, along with some of your family history including the added bit in the comment above. I was curious about the second great-uncle. Very interesting.
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January 25, 2017 at 11:09 am
Thanks, Mandie. I’m fascinated by my family history. There seem to have been a number of interesting characters.
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January 25, 2017 at 11:28 am
Two great stories for the price of one, although no happy ending. Great take!
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January 25, 2017 at 11:29 am
Thank you.
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January 25, 2017 at 11:32 am
A tragic accident. The real life consequences are also startling. A family history that could also make a great longer story. Well done.
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January 25, 2017 at 11:36 am
Out of mercy, I’m restraining myself from boring the world with all the facts of my personal family history, but there’s enough tragedy on that side of my family to write a novel.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
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January 25, 2017 at 11:45 am
I don’t think your stories would be boring, Kecia! The two above are engaging to say the least!
Sad accident to have occurred, though…
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January 25, 2017 at 11:48 am
Thanks, Dale. I suppose I could find a happy ending somewhere. I’m here, after all!
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January 25, 2017 at 11:49 am
There ya go… anyways, the wild stories are the best, happy or sad endings…
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January 25, 2017 at 11:58 am
Very graphic. I was once playing hopscotch with a friend on the street outside our house when a horse-drawn milk cart ran over my friend’s head. I still remember that day as though it were yesterday. Well done.
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January 25, 2017 at 12:05 pm
Oh my, Sandra! I’m sorry you had to suffer that. Thanks for sharing your experience. And for reading my tale.
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January 25, 2017 at 2:04 pm
A sudden twist of fate, or was it justice?
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January 25, 2017 at 2:06 pm
Hi James. Thanks for visiting and making a comment.
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January 25, 2017 at 2:11 pm
What an engaging story, although the tragic ending made me sad. It certainly seems plausible to me, to match the history that you know. How awful for the one who witnessed it, though. That kind of thing could really traumatize a person for life.
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January 25, 2017 at 2:31 pm
Thanks for your comment, Joy.
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January 25, 2017 at 5:40 pm
Ah, similar to how my younger half-brother was killed. His Mom opened the driver’s door to see as she backed up. He leaned forward to look back, too, as he always did, a practice that frightened my Dad. My little brother tumbled out of the car and under the rear wheel. His mother backed over him, then, shocked by what was happening, she put the into drive and ran over him again. She and Dad divorced within the year; neither was over the same.
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January 25, 2017 at 6:20 pm
So tragic. Thank you for sharing the story.
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January 26, 2017 at 3:47 pm
Wow, this packs a punch! I’m just sorry to hear this was a real life tragedy. 😔
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January 26, 2017 at 4:07 pm
Thanks for a very nice comment. I’m never really sure of the effect of my writing.
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January 27, 2017 at 9:55 am
Great stories well told. All the more harrowing for their authenticity.
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January 27, 2017 at 10:06 am
Thank you for the nice words. I appreciate every little one. 🙂
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January 27, 2017 at 11:42 am
A young man on the next farm down from us lost one leg just below the knee to a horse-drawn hay mower at age 10. Sometimes it’s hard to get a vehicle stopped whether its pulled by horses or mechanical.
Nice flash fiction and the additional family history made it all the more interesting. Sounds like you could easily write an entire book on your kinfolk’s adventures.
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January 27, 2017 at 11:55 am
Life is a risky business. Thanks for adding your story to the collection. My tale seems to have a common theme.
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January 30, 2017 at 1:27 pm
Such a sad story – all the more so because of the footnote
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January 30, 2017 at 1:38 pm
Thanks for visiting and for your comment. Always appreciated.
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February 4, 2017 at 4:46 am
Ouch, gritty and well told.
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February 4, 2017 at 7:37 am
Thanks again. 🙂
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