
A Black Mare
Grandpa slung her in a Western saddle at six months old, and baby clasped the reins. At twelve, braided for the barrel races, golden hair swayed past her waist. Silver spurs jangled on the heels of dusty boots. Mom sewed glittering suits for the queen competitions, where the young woman and her mare were rhinestone stars. What a horse. What a horse…thirty years. What a horse that black mare had been.
The woman aged and bought another, bred a likely mare, raised foals, but the arena’s gold had grayed.
The glass is thin, caulking stripped, and cold creeps in.
Friday Fictioneers: 100 word stories.
December 14, 2016 at 12:13 pm
Very nicely evoked
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December 14, 2016 at 12:22 pm
Thank you. 🙂
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December 14, 2016 at 12:38 pm
Dear Kecia
You said so much with a few words. I liked the arena’s gold had grayed. The list line is evocative. Nicely done. Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. I look forward to reading more from you.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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December 14, 2016 at 12:56 pm
Thank you, Rochelle.
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December 15, 2016 at 2:56 am
A terrific little story. Well done, and welcome.
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December 15, 2016 at 7:44 am
Thank you, Sandra. 🙂
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December 15, 2016 at 3:40 am
Lovely sense of a life passing, well done.
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December 15, 2016 at 7:44 am
Thanks, Iain. 🙂
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December 19, 2016 at 10:57 am
Nicely written, Kecia. Our time to shine is only a fleeting moment, like a comet shooting across the sky.
But oh what memories.
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December 19, 2016 at 11:17 am
Thank you.
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December 22, 2016 at 11:19 am
Good one. I love drabbles, too.
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December 22, 2016 at 11:26 am
I had to look up drabble and am so glad I did. I should know that if I’m going to write them. Thank you for teaching me something!
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December 22, 2016 at 12:27 pm
I have a bunch on my blog – just be aware ‘word’ seems variable between different word processors.
I got a bunch of them to exactly 100 words on one editor, but when I put them into Wattpad, for example, or Scrivener, the count was different.
Only matters if they’re for a contest, I guess, but if it’s supposed to be 100 words, you’re learning to write to a particular space (as tweeting teaches people to get to the point).
All in service of writing, except I’m too old for the games.
And Pride’s Children is 167K words – none of which I will remove. So there.
Writing is fun.
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December 23, 2016 at 1:42 pm
Seems like Glory Days are always a thing of the past. It’s someone else’s turn to be the rodeo queen.
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December 23, 2016 at 2:17 pm
Thanks for stopping by, Alice.
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February 6, 2017 at 2:45 pm
As always a very nice short story.
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February 6, 2017 at 4:39 pm
Thank you so much. 🙂
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March 10, 2017 at 10:13 pm
What a perfect capture of the memories of glory! So many blanks we can each fill in, reading this one. Brava!
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March 11, 2017 at 5:50 am
Thanks!
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March 21, 2017 at 7:37 pm
Great. Felt the love and the sadness
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March 21, 2017 at 7:45 pm
Thanks. ❤
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