Tensions High
A murmur traveled the hall as two, cloaked rangers entered White Horse Inn.
Marcello’s eyes flashed, but Tatya’s gaze urged caution.
She approached an aproned man. “Goodman, we need—”
“He don’t serve your kind,” said a gruff voice.
“We’re here to rest. The horde advances.”
“Whose fault is that?” The man wore Lord Albaxen’s livery and a longsword. “We don’t offer refuge to rangers guiding enemies to our door.”
Tatya addressed the proprietor, “What say you?”
He wrung his apron. “I…I…Albaxen’s soldiers, they—”
Albaxen’s man growled. “Shut your trap!”
The innkeeper bobbed. “Yes, Sir Raghnall.”
“Sir? A cur from Northport’s docks!”
Despite good intent, Tatya was a lousy diplomat; Marcello drew his sword. Raghnall matched. Villagers screamed, and the innkeeper ran. Tatya swung her cloak, blinding their opponent.
By the time Raghnall could see, she’d notched an arrow. “Halt! If you hope to survive, stand with us.”
Lord Albaxen’s man froze. “Stand with you? You’ve fled in defeat! Cowards!”
Marcello could suffer no more. His friends had died slowing the horde. He struck, slaying the man.
“Marcello…” Tatya lowered her bow.
“I’m sorry. I…our friends.”
“Yes. Find the proprietor to clean this mess. I’ll bring our packs.”
Sunday Photo Fiction: 200-word stories
photo credit: A Mixed Bag
July 9, 2017 at 2:35 pm
Loved this take on the prompt! Great 🙂
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July 9, 2017 at 3:46 pm
Thank you, and welcome to the blog.
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July 10, 2017 at 6:09 am
This was well written, but I feel I’ve jumped into the middle of an ongoing story here. A bit of back story might help. Cheers, Varad.
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July 10, 2017 at 6:19 am
Yes. Thank you.
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July 10, 2017 at 11:18 pm
an action filled story.
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July 11, 2017 at 6:36 am
Indeed. Thank you for visiting.
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July 11, 2017 at 12:18 pm
Loved your story. Great tension.
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July 11, 2017 at 1:11 pm
Thank you.
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July 12, 2017 at 9:08 am
Action packed scene!
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July 12, 2017 at 9:59 am
Thank you for reading, Dahlia.
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July 12, 2017 at 11:20 am
My pleasure😊
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July 14, 2017 at 5:45 pm
Lots going on here!
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July 15, 2017 at 6:50 am
Yes. Thank you for reading.
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July 15, 2017 at 7:56 am
There’s a lot of action in that one scene, Kecia. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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July 15, 2017 at 1:19 pm
Thank you, Suzanne.
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July 21, 2017 at 10:42 am
I like it. Reminded me of a cross between Game of Thrones and Lord of the Rings.
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July 21, 2017 at 10:46 am
🙂 Thank you.
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